The main characters in most of my novels share at least one characteristic. They all write for a living or aspire to be writers. In my latest release, Trails in the Sand, the main character is an environmental writer. The choice of career is no accident on my part, and as an author, I’m not an exception for creating characters who write.
Pat Conroy’s Beach Music is the story of travel writer Jack McCall who escapes into his work to lose the past. In Little Women by Louisa May Alcott, Jo March’s passion for writing fuels her until she marries the professor. Thanks goodness, we’ve come a long way since the novel’s publication in 1868.
In Trails in the Sand, environmental writer, Caroline Carlisle, writes about the wildlife impacted by the Deepwater Horizon oil spill. The wildlife experts in Florida choose her as the only reporter allowed to cover the sea turtle nest relocation project, which involved digging up nests and moving the eggs to the Atlantic coast to save them from the oil. She’s able to observe the momentous event firsthand. Much to her surprise, she begins to uncover secrets about her family in the pursuit of the sea turtle story. Caroline’s status as a reporter allows her special access, which helps unfold the plot.
I use writers as main characters because they are perfect observers and can go into situations where the average character couldn’t or wouldn’t go. On the television show, Castle, Richard Castle writes murder mysteries using a New York City detective as his main character. As a result, Castle researches his novels by going to murder scenes with the detective and helps to solve cases. Far-fetched maybe, but it’s enjoyable. His status as a writer allows him latitude to observe and write realistic, yet fictional, plots
Writers uncover information and find ways to expose culprits. In the novel I’m currently writing, a minor character is a newspaper reporter. The main character relies on him, not only for information about her husband’s murder, but she also gives him information in hopes he can help solve the mystery.
Writers are resourceful with contacts in high places, which can help move the plot along. Most reporters, in the real world, keep their sources close. In the case of Trails in the Sand, Caroline Carlisle speaks directly to wildlife officials, receives press releases, and enjoys loyal, established relationships with her sources, which brings her into the inner workings of government during the crisis. She also knows how to do research, which again is a plus for plot movement.
There’s another reason for a writer to use a writer as a character. Research makes up a large portion of my life when I’m working on a novel. Even though the author makes up the plot details, the details still need to be accurate and plausible. When I wrote about sea turtles and their habits in Trails in the Sand, I needed to research how long they lived, where they nested, how they made a nest on the beach, how long the eggs incubated, and what happened after the hatchlings emerged from the eggs. It took me days to research the details to write one scene where a sea turtle comes ashore to lay eggs as two teenagers watch on the beach.
I didn’t need to research the life of a writer because I’ve lived it. I’ve been a journalist. I’ve traveled for the job. I’ve worked with scientists, and I’ve interviewed many people in very strange situations – a man who owned a pack of hairless dogs he kept at his home in a rusty and remote trailer in north Florida comes to mind.
Some of my favorite people are writers, and they qualify as “characters” by many standards. I might as well use them in my stories. They make good company in a rather isolated career.
Caroline tries to explain to her mother that she wants to be a writer when she’s sixteen. I think I wrote this scene because I wished I’d been brave enough to tell someone I wanted to write at that age. Instead, I did the acceptable thing and became an English teacher. From Caroline Carlisle on writing in Trails in the Sand:
“You can’t be a writer,” Momma said when I was sixteen and told her of my career plans. “You need a profession you can count on to support you. You can’t depend on a man, especially the way you act.”
“I want to be a writer,” I said. “Who says I can’t be the next John Steinbeck?”
“I certainly hope not, young lady. Isn’t he that writer who killed himself a few years back? Is that the kind of life you want for yourself?”
“Of course not, Momma, and you’re thinking of Ernest Hemingway. Steinbeck wrote The Grapes of Wrath. I want to write a book like The Pearl – so brilliantly poignant and symbolic. The Grapes of Wrath is all right, but somehow I think if you can get the message across in fewer words, you have truly mastered the art of language. He uses ants and oysters to tell his tale.”
Momma stared at me as if I’d lost my mind. And I guess in the world of Calico, Florida, I did stand out as a little odd. I spent long summer days down on the riverbank reading, writing, or observing the world around me. Nature became my home, and the turtles, frogs, and birds of the Calico River that bordered our town were my friends.
“Where did you come from, child?” Momma asked. “How do you know these things? Sometimes you talk just like Alex.”
“Uncle Alex? He liked to write?”
“He loved nature, absolutely loved everything about it, and talked about it like you do.” Momma was no longer staring at me; she was gazing out the kitchen window into the back yard. “He loved chasing fireflies, too, just like you.”
“I wish I’d known him, Momma. What if I study marine biology? Is that a substantial subject?”
“It’s something,” she said as she turned back around. “At least you’ll be able to teach. You’ll need something to do with your life.”

9 responses to “Writer as the Main Character”
One teacher to another, one writer to another, lovely excerpt. It interests me the you have a common element in all your written work. I feel I stick with one in mine, as well, although it’s a little more nebulous. Maybe someday school children will write essays about us! Great post.
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That’s a good goal. I used my great grandfather’s Civil War journal in my AP English class once. I paired it with Stephen Crane’s Red Badge of Courage without telling my students the source of either passage. Grandpa faired very well against the classic.
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Go, Grandpa! As you know, I love your grandfather’s work, so that doesn’t surprise me.
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And if our characters aren’t writers, parts of us are in our characters.
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Yes, they are. I always say that writers who deny it, aren’t being honest.
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Great excerpt, PC. It’s funny – I’ve written about make-up artists and writers. Guess what I am?
In many ways, we write what we know, but the beauty of fiction is that we’re encouraged to take that to an infinity of levels.
I love what you said about wishing you had been brave enough to say what you really wanted to do when you were younger. I think a lot of us probably feel that way. Although…I’ve read what I wrote at 16 and, well…let’s just say I’m glad none of it’s published anywhere. Ha ha!
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That’s true about what I wrote in my early years, but it wasn’t about craft. I was pleasantly surprised that I wrote with clarity and precision. However, what turns my face red is what I wrote about life as if I knew everything. Naivety and arrogance are rather annoying.
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Ha. Yes, that’s embarrassing too. But unlike you, I’m just plain embarrassed about the immaturity of it all – the writing and my thoughts. Sheesh. Thank goodness we didn’t have facebook back then!
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Hazy – I think about that all the time. If we had Facebook when I was coming up, I believe my life would have taken a turn for awful!
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